Saturday, July 18, 2015

CHUVARCHITHRAM

Chuvarchitram

Veettumutathe orange marathile manjuthullikalailoode sooryaprabha puthapil moodiputhapchu kidakhunna parvathy kuttiyude mukhatheykhu adichukondirunnu.
"Parvathy kuttiye nee ethuvare ennitille"amma adukalayile ninnu chodhikhunna shabdham ala adichu kondirikhunnu.
Muthashi ponnuvinu edupil iruthi prathel vaayil vechu kodukhukayayirunnu
Muthashi:"ponnu se veegam kazhikhu ellenkil njan eppo puli maniyane vilikhum"
Ponnus:"puli mani enthu cheyyum"
Muthashi :"puli manikhu ishttapedathavare kaanumbo mani avante sanchiyil kidakhunna shankethduthu oothum,appo kaatinnu puli oodivannu kadichu kollum"
Ponnus:"kolluo"
Muthashi:"aah kadichu keeri thinnum
Muthashiyude Puli mukhabhavam kandu ponnu nilavilikhunnu.
Nilavili shabdham kettu parvathy kidakhayil ninnu njetti eniyikhunnu.
deshyathodu parvathy kidakhayil ninnu ponnu vinte adukhalekhu oodi.
Parvathy:"enthada ponnu alarane"
Ponnu:"ee ammooma enne pulimaniye kondu puliye vilipikhumennu paranju pedipikhuva"
Parvathy:"eda ponnu athu pulu kadhayada ee kadha njan cheruthayirunappo thottu parayunna kadhaya"
"Athu oru paavam bhranthana,etho puli irangiya divasma ayalum ee naatil vanne athina ayale puli maninnu vilikhane paavam!ayaalu nannayittu chuvaril kariyum paayalum vechu padangal varakhum"
Amma:"edi parvathi nee ethuvare kulichille"
Parvathy school kuppayavumeduthukondu kulumuriyilekhodi.
Kulikazkinju parvathy paavaada eduthu noki kondu paranju "eni nee pedikanda eni thottu ninakhu shobana teacherinte chooral adi kittilla ketto!ennu thottu puthiya kanakhu maasha teacher sthalam maari poyi!eeshvara paavam maashu aavane"
Amma"edi nee ethuvare kulichu kazhinjille"
Parvathy:"aah kazhinju"
Amma:"vegam vannu kazhikhu achan irangarayi"
Parvathy thidukhathil kazhichu,orungi irangi
Achan irangunna thakam noki aarum kaanathe parvathy muttathe orange marathil ninnu randu orange parichu bagil ittu.
Achan:"enthadi parvathy ninte mukhathoru kalla lakshanam"
"Eyy onnu illa acha "parvathy oru kalla chiriyode paranju.
"Paru kuttiye nee pottuvechille"amma chotupathram koduthu kondu chodhichu
Ammede nettiyil irunna pottaduthu avalde neetiyil pathichittu nettiyil chumbichu.
Aval Achanante cycilinte purakil kayari purakoottu thirinju irunnu.
Achan:"nee enthina eppozhum purakootu thirinju irikhane"
Parvathy:"thirinju irikhumbozhe enikhu elaam kanaan patoolu acha"
Achan:" ahh veezhathirunaal mathi"
Parvathy Achante cycleil irunnu manjil mungiya pachappu puthacha theyila thootangalum,kunnukalum okhe kandu aaswadhichu kondirunnu!
Bheeran maamede chaaya kadayude munpil ethiyapo parvathy melle bag thurannu aah randu orange eduthu achan kaanathe kayil othukhi.
puli maniye thedi avalaude kannukal oodi,stheram ayaal avide oru kadathinnayilanu urangaaru oru kootam nayakalodoppam.annu ayaal avide thanne undayirunnu,aval aarum kaanathe orange melle ayaale nere erinju koduthu pathivupole.
Ayaal valare aakranthathode athetheduthittu avale noki chirichu.
Pettannu achan cycle brake ittu nirthi,aval pettannu bhayathode thirinju noki!aroo cyclinte munpil nilkunnu.
Achan:"entha bheeran ikha"
Bheeran ikha:"eda ravi nee arinja dho aa kaanana veetil innale kallan kayari 50 pavante swarnam kondupoyi"
Achan:"50 pavana!ennittu police vannile"
Bheeran:"ah vannu!oru thumbum kittiyilla!pakshe enikhu ariyaam araanennu!"
Achan:"araa ikha?"thazhana shabdathil chodhichu.
Bheeran"aah halakhu pidicha puli mani thanna!"
Achan:"ikha kando"
Bheeran:"illa!avan allathe vere aara!avan innale ente peedikade  chuvaril oru halakhu padam varachu vechu!athu kanda thanne ariyaam avan thannaya kattethennu"
Achan:"oh atho!avan edakhu edakhu oronnu chuvaril varkharille athupole chumma varachathayirikhum!alla enthayirunnu padam!
Bheeran:"athu kure bharaniyil swarnam nirachu vechirikhunathu"
"Ee halakhu pidichavane ee nateennu oohttikhanam!ithu eppo 3am mathe pravishyamanu ente chuvaru vrithkedakhunathu!avan ee peedikede munpile kidakhu!avanneyum pattikaleyum kanda thanne ee peedikayil aarum varilla"
Achan:"njan potta ikha!dha ivale schoolil aakhiyittu venam jolikhu pokhan"
Bheeran:"allaa njamede chundhari kutti evide undayirunna!"
Parvathy cheru naanathode chirichu.
"Shari poykholeen"bheeran paruvinnu tata kaanichu avalum tata kaanichu
Cycle yathra veendum thudangi.
Cycle yathrakidayil parvathy cheru konchal swarathil chodhichu
"Acha! Acha enikhu enna cycle vangi tharane"
Achan:"nee kanakhinu noorinu nooru vangumbo"
Parvathy mukham veerpichu deshyathode thirinju irunnu!
School muttathu ethi!achanu pathivu pole taata kaanikhathe parvathi pinangi thirinjunokhathe schoolilekhu nadannu!achan cheru punchiriyode avale thanne noki ninnu!aval kurachu dhooram nadanittu thirinju nookhi chirichu kondu taata kanichu!achanum potti chirichu kondu taata kanichu.achan jolikhu yathra thirichu parvathy classilekhum.
Classil kuttikal elaarum vannu kazhinjirunnu!aake motham shabdha kolaahalangal!aval avalude priya koottukari aaya chakhiye thedi ayalude kannu aah classilmuriyil motham oodi!
Chakhi:"de ingu vaa!"
Paru punchirichu kondu oodichennu avalde aduthu irunnu.
Chakhi:"nee athu kanda!"
Parvathy:"enthu?"
Chakhi:"namde sheetal puthiye pencil kondu vannu !athinu bhayangara neelam!athinte mootilu oru paavayum!avar kanyakumariyil poyappo vangiyethennu!avalde oru pathraasu!"
Parvathy asooyayode chakhiyude penciline nokhi kondirinnu!
Class thudanganullu maniyude shabdham pettennu ala adichu kolahalangal ellaam rathriyude nishabdhadhayilekhu vazhimaari.
Class aarambichu.oro period kazhiyumbozhum parvathy puthiya kanakadhyapakane varumenna prathekshayil kathirunnu!
Oduvil kanakhu class ethi!aval prarthanabharithamayi kaathirunnu!
Oduvil ayaal vannu!shantha mukhamulla ayale kandu avalkhu aashwaasm aayi karanam ayaalude kayyil vadi illa!aval jeevithathil adyamayanu vadi illatha oru kanakhu maashine kaanunathu!
Ellavarum eneetuninnu vandhichu!
Ayyal cheru punchiriyode ellavarodum irikhan paranju
Kootathil ulla etho kurumban uchathil choodhichu"maashinte peru entha"
Maashu:"krishnan kutti"
Maashu:"njan ethu vishayam padipikhana vanne ennu ariyamo"
Ellarum ore swarathil paranaju"kanakhu"
Maashu:"gud!aarkhokhe kanakhu ishtamanu?"
Ellavarum kayy poki pakshe parvathy maathram kayy pokhiyilla!
Maashu:"ah gud!athtara kayy pokathe!
Ellarum ore swarathil paranju"mandu parvathiya"
Maashu parvathyude adukhalekhu chennittu choodhichu"entha mole ninakhu kanakhu ishtamallathe !kanakhu nalla rasamalle!"
Parvathy:"kanakhu teacher maar enne eppozhum thallum!athukonda enikhu ishtamallathe!"
Maashu avalude thalayil thalodikondu paranju"njan thallila appo kanakhu ishtapedo paru kutti"
Parvathy punchirichu kondu thalayatti!
Aval aah divasm muzhuvanum santhoshathillayirunnu karanam avale oru adhyaapakarum  thalodiyittilla!school vittu varunna vazhikhu pulimaniyude eduthum paranju avalde puthiye maashine patti ayaal athonnu shradhikhunillenkil polum!aval aah maashine kurichu ammayodum  achanodum vaanolam pukazhthi.avalkhu schoolil pookanulla ishtam koodi!aval kanakhu nannayi padikhan thudangi!
Aval classil pokaan pandethekal utsaham kaati!
Oru diwasm aval classil vechu maashinode oru samshayam chodhichu!!appol maashu samayamillathathukondu uchakhu staff roomil varaan paranju!
Aval valiya utsahathode  staffroomil chennu!staffroomil sir mathrame undayirunnullu!sir avle adukhalekhe varaan paranju!oru suhruthine pole sir avalude tholil kayyittu avalde samshayam paranju koduthu!
Pakshe ayalude viralukal avalude pinchu shareerathiloodu alanju kondirunnu!sneham enthu kaamam enthu ennu ariyatha aval athu sneham kondanennu karuthi!
Divasangal kazhiyumthoorum ayalude kaama kannukalude moorcha koodi kondirunnu!
Avaalude paavadayude meelulla viralootavum ,thaloodalum koodi vannu,avalkhu ithu snehamallenna thonnal vannu thudangi karanam avalude achano ammayo engane cheyyarilla.
Oru divasm ayaal avalude paavadakhakatheykhu kayyidan shramikhumbo aval kaythatti maatiyittu paranju"njan achanodu paranju kodukhum nokhikho!"
Maashu:"nee enthu parayum!"
Parvathy:"maashu enganayokhe cheyyanathu!"
Maashu:"nee paranjo! Nee paranja ninna njan kanakinu tholpikhum!appo ninakhu thanne thallukittum,ninne schoolu maatanum njan parayum!"
"Allenkil njan thanne elaam parayaam !nee nale varumbo achane vilichitu varanam ketto!vilichondu vannillenkil nee classil varanda!"
Idi minnal ettapole aval akhe thakrnnu ninnu!ithuvare undayirunna santhosham elaam chilludayunnathu pole thakarnnu veenu!
Schoolil ninnu veetilekhu ennum santhoshichu  kootukarkhoppam pokunna aval Annu dhukhathil ekaanthamayi nadanu !aval parisaram onnum shradhikunillayirunnu!puli mani ye polum aval marannu!puli mani noki yenkilum aval shradhikhathe poyi!
Pitte diwasm achane vilichondu varaan paranja kaaryam engane achanodu parayum ennu vyakulapettu kondirunnenkilum dhairyam illathathukondu aval paranjilla!
Pitte diwasm avale classinte purathu nirthi!avalude manassu aakhe thakarnnu!aroodu vishamangal parayaan aakathe aval veerphu mutti!
Aval annu kure dhairyam sambharichu ammayodu parayaan theerumanichu! Ammayodu konchi konchi aval achan schoolil varaan paranja karyam avatharipichu,achan jooli kazhinju vannapo amma achanodu avatharipichu!achan parvathiye deshyathode thurichu nooki.onnum mindathe poyi!
aval aa rathri motham urakham varathe thirinjum marinju kidannu!
Neeram veluthu! Parvathy vilariya mukhathode schoolil pokan irangi.
Pathivu thettichu aval cyclil nere achane ketti pidichu irunnu avalde ullile bhayam maraan!
School ethi avalude nenju kudu kude idichu kondirunnu!kanakhu maashine thappi staffroomil chennu!maashu enneetu vannu
Achan:"entha maashe ente molu valla thetum kaanicho?"
Mashu:"eey aval midukhi alle,"parvathiye nokhi kondu paranju.
Parvathy njetti!aval aashwasathode neduveerpittu.
Achan :"pinnentha maashe varaan paranje"vinaya bhavathil chodhichu
Maashu:"athu molu kanakinu kurachu pinnottanu athu kondu schoolil vechu athrakhu shradhikhan pattunilla!athukondu saukaryamullapol ente veetil kondu vannal njan kurachu padipichu kodukham!"
Parvathyude mukham veendum vaadi!
Achan:"athinentha vidalo santhoshame ullu!maashinu ingane oru manassu undallo athu thanne valiya kaaryamanu"
Maashu:"ethokhe ente kadama alle"parvathye noki cheru punchiriyode paranju.
Ayaalude olinjirikhunna kaama kannukal avalkhu kaanamayirunnu!
Achan thirichu poya sheshavum avulude manassil ayaale kurichulla chinthakal avale alatti kondirunnu.aval oru classum shradhikathe irunnu!oduvil kanakhu class ethiyappo ayaal vannu !
Ayaaal avale noki chirichu!aval nananja kannukalode mukham thirichu!ayaal adukhalekhu vannu paranju"nale varumallo vetilekhu alle achanodu paranjittundu vaykittu 6.30 shesham konduvaraan!avalude kannil ninnu oru thulli avalude pusthakathil veenu!"njan paranjathellaam orma undallo"aval dhukhathode thala thazhthi.
Annu classu kazhinju aval veetilekhu pokave aval oru mathil chuvaril oru chuvarchitram kandu"karanju kondirikhunna oru kutti"athu puli mani varachathanennu manasilayi!puli maniye thedi avalude kannukal oodi!
Athinu sameepathu mani kure patti kootathinte naduvil irukhunathu kandu!aval ayalodu deshyathil chodichu"enne aana ee varachirikhanne "ayaal aval parayunnatho vannatho onnum ariyathe oru pattikuttiyude thalayil ninnu peen nulli kondirunnu!"aval nadanna sambhava vikaasangal elaam paranju karanam bhodham illathe oraloda aakumbo ellaam thurannu parayamalo ayaal arodum parayillalo!aval ellaam paranju kazhinjittum!oru bhaava vatyasavum illathe irukhunathu kandu
Avalkhu deshyam vannu!"ninakhu ini onnum tharilla!ninne veruthe alla bhraanthan ennu villikane!poda!"
Aval deshyathode karanjukondu nadannu.
Ennetheyum pole aa rathriyum avalkhu shiva rathri yayirunnu!pitte divasm ayalude veetil pokunna karyamorthu pedichu orakham vanilla!
Pitte divasm njarazhicha ayyathu kondu school illa!pakshe aa santhosham avlkhu undayirunnilla!aval annu pakalonnum kalikhaan poyilla!aval clockil noki neram enni irunnu!oduvil samayam aakarayi.avalude nenjidupu koodi. amma avale kulipichu orukhi sundhari kutti aakhi.achan avale kondu pookan vannu!
Achan:"enthadi parvathy ninte mukham kashaayam kudichathupole irikhane! kanakhennu ketta aapo evalude mukham maarum madichi kotha"
Aval onnum mindathe cyclinte purakil kayari achane ketti pidichirunnu.
Amma avale tata kaanichu!cycle neengum thoorum amma akannu kondirunnu!
Avalude kannil ninnu kannuneer kannmashiyoodopam ozhuki kondirunnu!
Oduvil ayaalude veedu ethi!aval ethandu chalanamillatha avsthayilayi. achante kaypidichu veetu muttathu ethiyappo aah veetil aareyum kaananilla purathuninnu pootiyirikhunnu!avar kurachu neeram avide kaathu ninnu!
Achan:"evide aareyum kanaan illalo paru.namukhu nale varaam"
oduvil aareyum kaanathathukondu avar madangi!
parvathyude manasil ashwasathinte velicham vannu kaaranam avalkhu oru divasm koodi kittiyalo! Aval veetil valiya ahllathathode thirichu vannu
Aa rathri aval nannayi urangi!
Adutha divasm ravile ennetheyum pole aval enittu schoolilekhu pokaan thayareduthu pakshe annu avalkhu dhukhamonnum thonniyirunilla!
Ennetheyum pole aval achante cyclil purakottu thirinjirunnu!oduvil cycle veetinte gatinte purathethiyappo avarude chuttu mathili oru chithram kaanunnu"oru puli oru aale kadichukondu pokunnu sameepathu oru shankum"
Achan:"ee puli mani ye kondu valiya shalyamanu evan ee chuvaru motham varachu nashipikhum"
Kavalayil enthiyappo avide aake oru aal kootam,achan karyam enthenu aal kootathil undayirunna kuttannodu chodhichu
Kuttan"arinjilla ennale puli irangi !adivarathu ninnu oru shavam kitti! Namade schoolile puthiya kanakhu maashintethanennu parayunnu"
Achan:"aaru maasho!eppo?"
Kuttan:"kooduthalonnnum ariyilla shavam innu ravile kittayathe ullu!kayviral onnum illa!elaam puli kondu poyi"
Achan:"ayyo kashtamayi poyi!nalla maashu ayirunnu innale koodi samsaarichathe ullu"dukhtahil paranju!
"Alla kurachu divasmayi bheeran ikhade kada thurakhathe!"
Kuttan:"athu arinjille!bheeran ikhaye policu pidichu!"
Achan:"enthinu"
Kuttan:"bheeran ikhaya apparathe veeteennu swarnam moottichathu!"
Achan aashcharyathoode paranju"oh ee kaalathu aaraya vishwasikhane"
Ithellaam kettu kondu parvathy nishchalamayi ninnu!avalkhu oru vikaravum thonniyilla!aval puli maniye thedi bheeran ikhayude pedika thinnayilekhu noki!
Ennatheyum pole mani avide oru kootam patti kalude kude irikhunnu pakshe avan aasadharanamayi avale noki roudra bhavathil  chirichu!ayalude kayyil avalkhu parichitamaya oru watchum!aval thazhnna swarathil " maashinte watch!"
Cycle munootu chalichu!cycle munnottu pokumbo thirinju irikhunna aval ayalude sanchikhullil oru velutha shanku avalude shradhayil pedunnu!avalude kannu nanayaan thudangi!aval nananja kannukaloode bagil ninnu orange maniyude neere erinju koduthu!
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------VIMAL SURESH